Re-edited

Yesterday I had my Level 4 Critique with Glen Guy on the Arcanum, a very interesting and useful critique which gave my plenty to think about. I have started looking again at the images that were critiqued in light of the comments and this is one I have re-edited. I’m not sure this is the ‘finished’ version but it is certainly different from the original image. I have increased the luminance and colour contrast, done some dodging and burning trying to make the image less flat. Better? I think so, any opinions?

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This was the original edit.

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